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-This game is being designed as a mini-game (and practice) for a larger project. In the bigger project, the introductory details will vary slightly. In the standalone version of the game, [[Louise]] will begin in the crawlspace of her family's home, ostensibly intending to visit her friend [[Kuchi Kopi]] at his night-time speakeasy. In helping him with some clean up tasks, she discovers a turkey in the toilet. [[Kuchi Kopi]] is confused and furious, and asks her to help him figure out who has done this. [[Louise]] will be able to collect clues in the room and gather information to give herself some leads. She will use the information and items she encounters to help.\\
+[[Louise]] enters the crawlspace of her family's home, intending to visit her friend [[Kuchi Kopi]] at his night-time speakeasy. In helping him with some clean up tasks, she discovers a turkey in the toilet. [[Kuchi Kopi]] is confused and furious, and asks her to help him figure out who has done this. [[Louise]] will be able to collect clues in the room and help, although the time in the larger game will keep running.\\
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-Outside of the bar, [[Louise]] will enter a dreamy landscape like the fever dream in "Flu-ouise." The landscapes she encounters all resemble various places either she or Bob have imagined, with the final location resembling the snowy mountain she envisioned climbing in "The Bleakening." At the end of her adventures, she will climb the mountain to encounter the [[Bleaken]]. She will learn from him that he thought he was punishing the people in the bar for not being enthusiastic enough about St. Patrick's Day, but he fell asleep and put the turkey in the toilet in his sleep, dreaming that he was a baby [[bleaken]], playing with his toy soap dog. \\
+Outside of the bar, [[Louise]] enters landscapes that resemble various places she has imagined, with the final location resembling the snowy mountain she envisioned climbing in "The Bleakening." At the end of her adventures, she will climb the mountain to encounter the [[Bleaken]]. She will learn from him that he thought he was punishing the people in the bar for not being enthusiastic enough about St. Patrick's Day, but he fell asleep and put the turkey in the toilet in his sleep, dreaming that he was a baby [[bleaken]], playing with his toy soap dog. \\
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 [[Kuchi Kopi’s Bar|Kuchi Kopi's Bar]]:\\
-[[Louise]] enters the crawlspace. [[Kuchi Kopi]] is behind the bar. Bakeneko, Dodomeki, and Mizuchi are at the bar. [[Kuchi Kopi]] complains that he is out of lucky charms again, but too busy running the bar to replace them. Someone exits the bathroom shrieking, and [[Louise]] looks in on it, discovering that there is a turkey in the toilet. [[Kuchi Kopi]] is irate and begins blaming the customers, who deny it, and Louise intervenes. The customers leave (Can choose to side with [[Kuchi Kopi]], blaming the customers, at which point [[Kuchi Kopi]] shuts down the bar for the night in frustration and joins her on her quest.)
+[[Louise]] enters the crawlspace. [[Kuchi Kopi]] is behind the bar. Bakeneko, Dodomeki, and Mizuchi are at the bar. [[Kuchi Kopi]] complains that he is out of lucky charms again, but too busy running the bar to replace them. Someone exits the bathroom shrieking, and [[Louise]] looks in on it, discovering that there is a turkey in the toilet. [[Kuchi Kopi]] is irate and begins blaming the customers, who deny it, and Louise intervenes. The customers leave (At this point, the player can choose to side with [[Kuchi Kopi]], blaming the customers, at which point [[Kuchi Kopi]] shuts down the bar for the night in frustration and joins her on her quest. Kuchi Kopi then becomes Louise's companion in the race.)
-***In the standalone version of the game, [[Louise]] will simply enter the bar and volunteer to help clean when she discovers the turkey.***
 Opting to help [[Kuchi Kopi]], [[Louise]] begins snooping around the bar for clues. Out the back exit are footprints of customers, which will lead to their homes. At one window is a dislodged lock and puddles.  In the kitchen, there is an empty cupboard where Kuchi Kopi’s cereal box used to be.